Research and Planning - Advert: Drafts of Advert

As a group, we created drafts for our advert in order to get a rough idea on what we want to create for our final idea. We also asked for feedback so we could look at the positives and negatives of our draft. With this feedback, we was able to then create the next draft after this to improve.

This is our first draft:

This is some of my feedback:

Positive:

• Clear information on the album availability etc.
• Consistency in theme colours etc with the digipak.
• Ratio and the framing of the picture is perfectly executed.

Negative:

• Easier to know who is the artist in the image.
• Better typography needs to be included and remove the white areas around logo.
• Make the artist name stand out more.

This is our second draft:

This is some of my feedback:


Positive:

• Typography unique 
• Main focus is artist

Negative:

• Abit dull
• Picture should look more meaningful